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« on: July 11, 2009, 12:58:46 AM »
One minor art critique:

In the panel where Mac pops out the broom, it was not immediately clear that that was what he was doing.  For me, the problem was that the "POINK!" got in the way of the ejection; also, some motion lines would have helped sell the action.

Otherwise, keep up the great work
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