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« on: March 15, 2008, 08:19:28 PM »
In my creative writing class at Uni we were doing some Haiku... Here's my only good one.

hope you enjoy.

Glasses Reflecting her,
Masking the Sadness inside,
Looking up she smiles.

its 5 syllables then 7 then 5.
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« Reply #1 on: March 15, 2008, 11:03:35 PM »
Nice, I like it.
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« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2008, 01:53:06 AM »
thanks.

when i wrote this i was thinking of... issue 90

iono why.. maybe it was just the glasses in her hands iono.

If anyone has any haiku of there own... if they wana put it up would like to read it...
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« Reply #3 on: March 18, 2008, 02:31:24 AM »
I did one probablynotbad one...

Reverberating
Through my ears, around my head
Music in the air.

I love that word - reverberating Cheesy it has all five syllables. But anyway... the only haiku I've done that isn't a half-joke or has some sort of punchline at the end.
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« Reply #4 on: March 18, 2008, 05:42:53 AM »
Nice, i can really dig that.

yeah I haven't really had much chance to do Haiku so my only attempts have been serious. but that might just be my mind set.
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