Color Me: Watching

[graham]

http://greyum.port5.com/image/watching.jpg

meh... not my best work.  I like the text, but it seems a bit off to me.  maybe some writer folk can suggest some editing for that, or fixing any crazy grammatical errors - if you feel it in your heart (or the sight of that text is so horrible...) just PM me, and I''ll update, with thanks :)

[Firewalker]

I'm new to the forums, though I've been lurking for a while. I promised myself that I'd get the inks done on this image before I posted anything, and having done so, here they are:



Larger Version Here

I'm working on the colours now, hoping you enjoy.

[munk]

It's a bit blurry... you might want to slightly sharpen it up.

[Firewalker]

I didn't notice that until I threw in the colour, it's caused me a few problems, but I think I've solved them....

Thanks for the advice, it's appreciated.

[Quwaar]

[Graham]
As night inches onward our hero, and his trusty sidekick, sift through the darkness, looking for any evil that would try to rape their fait city.

I didnt know the word sift so I looked it up, its kinda heavy but it does fit the lines. And a little grammatical C&C, with an "and" never a "," And infront of night there needs to be a "the"  imo.
So more like:  As the night inches onward our hero and his trusty sidekick sift through the darkness, looking for any evil that would try to rape their fair city.
Or somewhere a "." but I have no grammatical talent, so dont listen to me

[soulblade3]

just like to say thanx to Firewalker for the inked pic, makes it allot easier for me

[Firewalker]

just like to say thanx to Firewalker for the inked pic, makes it allot easier for me

MOOCHAR!!! j/k glad you found a use for it... my colouring has been sidelined by work, should get back to it tomorrow...

[graham]

And infront of night there needs to be a "the"  imo.
So more like:  As the night inches onward our hero and his trusty sidekick sift through the darkness, looking for any evil that would try to rape their fair city.
Or somewhere a "." but I have no grammatical talent, so dont listen to me ;)

Thanks for the help.  I did remove the comma's, but, I don;t really like the idea of a "the" infront of night so I left that alone :)

[Biscuit_]

And infront of night there needs to be a "the"  imo.
So more like:  As the night inches onward our hero and his trusty sidekick sift through the darkness, looking for any evil that would try to rape their fair city.
Or somewhere a "." but I have no grammatical talent, so dont listen to me

Thanks for the help.  I did remove the comma's, but, I don;t really like the idea of a "the" infront of night so I left that alone

Hehe, how bout this...

As the night inches onward our hero and his trusty sidekick sift through the darkness, looking for any evil that would try to rape their fair city.

Then, in a speech bubble...

But I'm hungry, so lets knock off the pizza delivery boy first...

And the squirrell can say...

Don't forget the nuts!

[graham]

Then, in a speech bubble...

But I'm hungry, so lets knock off the pizza delivery boy first...

And the squirrell can say...

Don't forget the nuts!

that would be funny, but I think it would be too hypocritical, even for me!

[Quwaar]

And infront of night there needs to be a "the"  imo.
So more like:  As the night inches onward our hero and his trusty sidekick sift through the darkness, looking for any evil that would try to rape their fair city.
Or somewhere a "." but I have no grammatical talent, so dont listen to me

Thanks for the help.  I did remove the comma's, but, I don;t really like the idea of a "the" infront of night so I left that alone

Hehe, how bout this...

As the night inches onward our hero and his trusty sidekick sift through the darkness, looking for any evil that would try to rape their fair city.

Then, in a speech bubble...

But I'm hungry, so lets knock off the pizza delivery boy first...

And the squirrell can say...

Don't forget the nuts!

hahaahhaa, LMAO

[Jort-]

pfew.....so finally I'm able to post my attempt


I'm a bit late i must confess, but the server all my art was stored on broke down to put it that way the server was a pc owned by a cousin of mine and his HD crashed or something.

I had to work about 13 out of 14 nights the last 2 weeks, resulting in such a lame background.... sry..

ciao

[soulblade3]

your late i'm still doing mine :$
but nonetheless it looks good

[Firewalker]

Colour (Work in Progress) I'll update as I complete it, but as it stands I'm not sure if I ever will so I'll post what I have just in case this is all I get to do. I still have to add the highlights and other dynamic lighting, but it's almost done. Plus I tried a completely new colouring technique, never tried before, I made it up as I went along, and so far I like it, aside from the fact that it's taking me longer, anyway, enough rambling here's the pic:

EDIT: I've done some editing, I think I might keep this as the final... but I'm not sure, any opinions on the path I should take? Keep Going or Stop?


Large Version - 200+ KB

[elorg]

wow Jort- that's awesome!