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« Reply #15 on: July 30, 2006, 08:15:21 PM »

One thing I've got to think of when you mentioned the riot shield...

This is set in modern times, right?

Then why would he have a full suit of armor and a templar sword?

I only suggested the sword because it looks like something that should be related to religion, maybe as an allusion to crusaders, or simply because it looks like a cross. You are right though, a sword and shield would do little good in modern times.
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« Reply #16 on: August 12, 2011, 04:41:42 PM »

woow this is perfect story if you work little bit more on it and think about your character.
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