Gotta topic I wanna run with . . .

[RinTinPoet]

I've been meaning to try my hand at short stories, and I'd like some insight on this. Let me know what you think:

It's present day. An older, female P.I. and her fresh-out-of-school tech specialist just got invited to a potential client's place. Only his place is off the mortal coil and in a more fiery, burning-tar, fire-and-brimstone type of coil (get where I'm going with this?). He wants to hire these two to track down and recapture seven demons who have escapsed to the living realm. More specifically, the seven demons of the Seven Deadly Sins. They have until the winter solstice -- just kidding, as long as they need -- to recapture them. The longer they are on Earth, however, the more damage to society will be done.

Let me know. Please, no thought theft. I recognize the risks I just took, but I figured why not?

Why do all these fiction stories have to include the winter solstice anyways?

[Vman]

Sounds like a pretty cool idea to me, I really enjoy detective/PI novels with a supernatural twist. There's more than few of them at this point and they're pretty succesful so there's certainly a place for them.

Seven Deadly Sin stories are always interesting as well, people have come up with some intertesting interpretations of them in the past.

[RinTinPoet]

I was actually thinking of implementing the Seven as corrupt people. You know, Greed as a tyrannical corporate entity, sloth as a mob boss, that sort of thing. I'm still thinking up scenarios. Also, character design.

[QuegudiodeZef]

Ive just put an order today, I guess this means that I would get the "new" version with improved support for protected 14500s?

Thanks